This is the first draft of our main task meaning that it was our first attempt at editing our clips. The reason for calling this a 'draft' are for reasons such as we felt as though there is more that we could do to improve on its outcome, changing aspects such as including more footage and the way that we went about editing.
We decided upon posting this draft to physically show what we had originally produced and so can explain in more depth the reasons as to why we chose to change it. We also feel that posting it upon or blogs gives us something keep referring back and compare to. It is also here to remind us of the pros of which can help us in knowing that only certain aspects need changing and not the entire footage.
What we have researched and obtained back from others, including our practical media teacher, is that we need to make our story line much clearer as this proved to be the main criticism. We plan on solving this by focusing more on her mental state and try to emphasise previous medical history in the hope that the audience will be able to have more of a clear understanding of the character and the reasons as to why she is in this situation.
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